[National Poetry Writing Month – composing a poem a day based on a prompt – Find an Emily Dickinson poem – preferably one you’ve never previously read – and take out all the dashes and line breaks. Make it just one big block of prose. Now, rebreak the lines. Add words where you want. Take out some words. Make your own poem out of it!]
I, not Death, stood up
it was not death.
I stood up… and all the dead…lie down?
It was not night for all
put out your tongues,
for noon was not frostmy flesh I felt crawl
fire, for just my marble feet, could keep cool
and yet, it tasted, like them all
the figures I have seen set for burial
reminded me, of mine as if my life were shaven
and fitted to a frame
i could not breathe without midnight
’twas like a key ,
when everything that ticked has stopped
and space stares all around
or grisly frosts first autumn morns
repel the beating groundbut, like chaos
stopless, without a chance
or even a report of land to justify despair
[with apologies to emily dickinson, based on her poem, ‘It was not Death, For I Stood up’]
[For the next poem, an Aubade, which i think is my best one so far, click here]
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