[And now, without further ado, our prompt (optional as always) for Day Eight: today I challenge you to write a palinode. And what’s that? It’s a poem in which the poet retracts a statement made in an earlier poem.]
It has always been you
It has been claimed
This by myself
In previous Aubade,
That coffee was
The thing i dreamt of
When in bed i laid
However, when my wife it read
She was not quite amused
So like a biased judge i now
Consider me recused
You see, she’s always been the one
My lady, tbV
[aka the beautiful Val]
Who slumbers beside me
This “coffee” was a passing fad
A once-off dalliance
And i will make it up to her
If given half a chance
[a little p.s. i must add
if you could keep this quiet
you will know why and understand
just as soon as you try it
i have made peace with my dear wife
we’re stronger than we’ve been
as long as she does never find
my drug patch of caffeine]
[For the next poem in the challenge which is a calligram aka shape poem, click here]
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