[Our prompt for today departs from such concerns, however. Today, rather than being casual, I challenge you to get rather classically formal, and compose a poem in Sapphics. These are quatrains whose first three lines have eleven syllables, and the fourth, just five. There is also a very strict meter that alternates trochees (a two-syllable foot, with the first syllable stressed, and the second unstressed) and dactyls (a three-syllable foot, with the first syllable stressed and the remainder unstressed). The first three lines consist of two trochees, a dactyl, and two more trochees. The fourth line is a dactyl, followed by a trochee.]
who me? don’t be syllable’y
write a Sapphics you say, as if it’s easy
to squeeze eleven syllables in a line
and just when you’ve got the eleven thing down
break it down to five
but i am not one for following the rules
thank-you for the brief, but i think i will pass
so please keep your syllable count to yourself
and let me do this
i will write the poem that i want to write
while everyone else struggles to make theirs “right”
i laugh as i watch them count on their fingers
while i just drop words
will i have regrets? maybe one day i might
but feeling bad about not being a sheep?
well that doesn’t seem to make a lot of sense
so perhaps i won’t
at the end of the day, when the lights go out
i will have the satisfaction of having
done my own thing, created in my own way
who is laughing now?
[Missed some days and so jumped ahead to day 20 to try ans catch up]
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