It feels like you’ve been hiding forever
While i stand in the sameplace pretending to slowly count down
Backwards from my childhood
When you were more than tangible and everywhere to be found
i gave up looking in the church buildings long ago
As so many of them seemed to somehow feel a lot more like church
Once the people had left
Laughing and chattering away
As they skipped over the deep snoring sounds
Of an infectious poverty on their way to their comfortable chariots
i looked for you in the thoughts and prayers
That were politely queued and sent off with the click of a button
In the calls to send money that were shouted at the cameras
Until, like a tidal wave of tsunami
They came pouring out of my television screen
Pooling in a pungent mess on my carpet
Leaving a damp mouldy stench
That sits forever on the edge of my tongue
i spent some years diving into worship songs
Confident that’s where i would find You at home
Yet the double thumbs up ‘life is great’ wordplay
Tore at my sole every time one of my feet
Sank to the bottom of these oceans
Turns out all was not well
igrewtired
“Come out! Come out! Wherever you are”
i raised my anthem as i wandered
through art galleries and used record stores
which gave me the warmest scent of your trail so far
But still no response.
You seem to take the hiding part pretty seriously.
i attempted to sing a song
Hoping i could hang the reasons for my devotion on a shining star
Tried listening for you
In the centre of the earthquake, wind and fire
That’s the way of the world i felt
Got to get you into my life
But unsurprisingly you were absent
In the resounding clanging nature
Of nature at its loudest and most violent
It was when the gentle whisper had passed through
That the light could be seen fading from my eyes
For even there
In that anticipated and expected moment..
Nothing.
Were you really playing so hard to get?
Dejected and confused i decided to slowly make my way back home
Thinking that this game had run its course
But even as i passed others on the way
i couldn’t find it in myself to
Let on what i had failed to find
So i dug deep
And gave them a feeble open-ended encouragement
About the David God
Who is close to the broken-hearted
And saves those whose spirits lie in pieces upon the floor
i found myself standing at a fire in the middle of the courtyard
Where three friends of mine who had heard about my game
Had set out from their homes and met together by agreement
To come and sympathise with me and comfort me
And i sat down among them
While they did their best to try convince me
That the fault was all my own.
The fourth one – wait, weren’t there three?
Said nothing.
But just sat there,
Writing in the dust with his finger.
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[For a rewording of the traditional Lord’s Prayer click here]
Flippin incredible poem. So much of your stuggles woven in with so much of Him. As it should be- cause if we could all get to that point… of meeting by the sand… things would become so much clearer and to quote Beatrice Clelland, “I would lose sight of you and see the Christ instead”…. and that’s were stories start and world views come crashing down!
Thanks so much Viv. For taking the time to read and for the comments~
Much appreciated
love brett fish